Imagine you are Mr Utterson. Write a letter to the police telling the story of Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde.
I promise afriend that I´ll never tell to anybody about this story that is about the guy that dissapeared whos name is Henry Jekyll. I was with my friend and we pass a house that was of a very bad man called Edward Hyde. But with the horrible things he had done what I wanted to do was met him and he was ugly. Later an inspector told me that someone kill an old man and he also show me a broken stick that said from your frien Gabriel Utterson to Henry. I was forgeting about Hyde and thinking more about Jekyll. I went to the house but he was ill and he told me a story. Henry told him that a man will go to his house to get a potion. When I heared this I ran to Jekyll´s house. I found Hyde with a poison on the floor and was a letter of Henry that told me that Henry and Edward were the same person.
From Gabriel Utterson
Juan, the content of your answer is ok, but you still need to work much more in your grammar. In that way, your writings will be clearer.
Well done Tommy! You’ve made a wonderful work. Don’t forget to check your grammar.
I don´t know why im writing to you this letter because I promise to a very close friend that I´ll never tell to anybody about this theme but ´this story is five years old so no one will mater. Do you remember Henry Jekyll, the man that suppously dissapeared?Well, this story is about him.
I was walking with a friend called Mr. Enfield as we do every Sunday and suddenly we pass near a misterious door. My friend told me that behind this doors was hiding a evil, ugly and unnice man called Edward Hyde. He told me that he push a child into the wet strees and he just laughted. At that moment, the only thing I wanted to do was to met him. I went alone and I saw his face, he was horrible. I told him that I was there because of Henry and he just laughted.On the morning, I went to Henry´s house to have breakfast and I told him the experience. (sorry I dont understand this part clearly). Months later an inspector came and told me that a man that for me was Hyde murdered a old man and he showed me a broken stik that said”to Henry, from your frien Gabriel Utterson”. We went to his house but we didnt find him. What we found was the other part of the stick but I told him that Henry was tall for that stick. I went to Henry´s house and he showed me a letter that said that Hyde scape from the city but I went with his servant called Poolehe told me that it was Henry´s handwriting. As the weeks passed I was forgeting about Hyde and thinking more about Jekyll.
One day I went to Henry´s house but Poole told me that he wasn´t available so I went to the backyard and called him shouting. He open the window and he was like ill so he told me to request Lanyon, another doctor. He was ill too. He told me a long story. Henry told him that a strange man will go to his house to get a potion he will give to him. There, Hyde entered and asked Lanyon to give him a glass of water. On there he put de potion and he drunk it. What he saw was Henry as a result.When I heared this I ran as fast as I can to Jekyll´s house. There, Poole open the door and guide me to the laboratory. The lab´s door was looked so I demolished it and I found Hyde with a poison on the floor. In the room, I found a Henry´s letter that told me that Henry and Edward were the same person. This was caused by a poiton he invented. Me, as a good friend, burned the letter to leave no evidence.
Hope this information help you with the investigation.
Regards, Gabriel Utterson
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