Imagine you are Oliver and you keep a diary of your life. Choose one of the many things that happened to you and write it down in your diary.
Hello diary, today i Was feeling bad because my father abandoned me and all those things but I am happy because a guy called Mr Brownlow adopted me so I am happy but the thing that happened to my father is so sad.
Fran, what do you mean by “all those things…” and “the thing that happened to my father is so sad…”. It is a little bit incomplete!
Bautista, please write it again like a diary entry, retelling one of the things that happened to Oliver as if you were him.
That the Sr. Greownlow adopted me. Also when I also went to London. And finally, when I saw when bill dead.
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